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joanwilder aka RaeWhit (joanwilder) wrote,
@ 2009-09-20 00:20:00

Entry tags:

drabble, my snarrys, nc-17, veridian_dair

FIC: Tit for Tat
Title: Tit for Tat (written for veridian_dair for her birthday)
Author: joanwilder RaeWhit
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: NC-17, mention of kinks
Summary: A discussion on what they've 'taught' each other.
A/N: This isn't technically late, Cath, as it's still your birthday in your time zone. I was inspired by your question of what kinks might still be out there that you might like. Hehe, this isn't really explicit, but if I get the right reaction from you, there could an additional scene. Happy Birthday, kid. Thanks for being such a great friend, first and foremost, and for the gift of your talent to fandom at large.

"I've learnt so much from you," Harry told Severus frankly.

"Oh?"

Harry nudged him playfully. "C'mon, you know I have. When we first started to fuck, I barely knew which end was up."

Severus reached out and tucked a strand of hair behind Harry's ear. "Well, I wouldn't go that far. But it's true, you were rather naïve." His eyes glittered for a moment, then he let out a soft snort.

"What?" Harry said warily.

His voice slightly hoarse, Severus said, "You remember you thought a blow-job meant you actually, well, blew?" He pressed his lips together tightly.

Harry laughed weakly. "Yeah, and you let me do it until I almost passed out. 'Potter, I think you'd achieve a better result if you sucked.' Yeah, real helpful you were."

"What a picture you made," Severus said softly, tracing a line down the middle of Harry's nose. "Cheeks all blown out, eyes like a house-elf's, and red as a beet."

Jutting his head forward to catch Severus' finger in his mouth, Harry suckled it loudly and sloppily. When Severus groaned, Harry pulled away suddenly. "Oh yeah? Come to think of it, I've taught you a thing or two," he said slyly.

Already pulling his nightshirt over his head, Severus asked "And what would that be?"

"Well, there was the nice leather flogger, and that plug shaped like a rutabaga, and…oh yeah, remember the enema?"

Severus' cock twitched at the thought of all three. Stepping from the bed, he held out his hand. "Perhaps if you'll refresh my memory?"

Harry took his hand and allowed himself to be pulled to his feet. "Really?" he asked as he slipped his arms around Severus and turned them both toward the door.

"Really," Severus murmured, already flushed with anticipation as Harry pushed him gently toward the bathroom.

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veridian_dair
2009-09-20 06:38 am UTC (link)

Yup, I still technically have 30 minutes of official birthday left.

*iz crying*

God, I sort of feel like Harry. I know so many kinks, and yet up until recently had no idea what "breathplay" was you wrote it (or at least I didn't know that was its category title) so I'm naive at times too.

Hmm....I *know* I like floggers and plugs, but I could use some ~~pushing~~ convincing on the enema topic. ;)

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	joanwilder 2009-09-20 08:08 am UTC (link)
	Awww, don't cry, shopgirl. Heee, I'm not convincing you of anything. Just trying to find 'new buttons.' (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	veridian_dair 2009-09-20 03:55 pm UTC (link)
	See, the thing is - if YOU write it...I just KNOW it will be hot. I'm just hanging out waiting to be converted. ;) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:57 pm UTC (link)
	Okay. Remember that you sort of agreed. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sra_danvers 2009-09-20 09:08 pm UTC (link)
	Happy birthday!!! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	countesszero 2009-09-20 10:36 am UTC (link)
	wunderbar! "Well, there was the nice leather flogger, and that plug shaped like a rutabaga, and…oh yeah, remember the enema?" a plug shaped like a ... what? off to wikipedia (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! Yeah, the rutabaga might be...stretching things. (very bad pun). Glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fancypantsdylan 2009-09-20 12:21 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2009-09-20 12:57 pm UTC (link)
	It's always lovely to have someone to help you learn new things. :) Nice job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:51 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks, kid. I learn so much from all of you. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2009-09-20 01:16 pm UTC (link)
	Bwahahahaha! Um, a rutabaga? Really? giggles You slay me. What a sweet ficlet. ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:52 pm UTC (link)
	As I said above, perhaps a rutabaga is stretching things (even as we speak). g*g Thanks, Ali! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sweetmelodykiss 2009-09-20 02:37 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, very nice! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:52 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks for reading--glad you liked it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hambares 2009-09-20 03:28 pm UTC (link)
	I can just see Harry blowing! What a strange sensation that must have been for Severus! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:53 pm UTC (link)
	I really will have to research why they call it a blow job.... Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	whitecotton 2009-09-20 04:42 pm UTC (link)
	Yep, that image of Harry blowing, his cheeks round and his face red, will stay with me for a while. God, but I'd love to see someone draw your description of that! The birthday girl is so lucky to receive such a very giggle-inducing ficlet. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 07:53 pm UTC (link)
	Hmmm, I might be able to find someone who'd do that. Thanks for reading, L. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sra_danvers 2009-09-20 09:09 pm UTC (link)
	I laugth very much with that blew XD but I think that Harry gets the last laugth XD Thanks! MARTA (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-20 09:12 pm UTC (link)
	Harry definitely gets the last, um, word in this exchange. Glad you liked it--thanks for telling me! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	dementordelta 2009-09-21 01:59 am UTC (link)
	Heeee! Yummy and giggle-worthy all in one! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-21 05:57 am UTC (link)
	Thanks! I'm about to expand my horizons with the sequel to this one. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	celestlyn 2009-09-22 02:58 am UTC (link)
	wipes tears from eyes Whew! It's a good thing I was by myself when I read that. The vision of Harry blowing like crazy is just too funny. I literally laughed 'til I cried. My son would have asked what I was laughing so hard about. How can I explain that? I wouldn't dare show it to him. I keep my secrets. Celeste (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-22 08:47 am UTC (link)
	Hi Celeste--I'm so glad I could make you laugh. And you're right...not something you'd want to explain to your family. Glad you liked it, and thanks for making me smile too. ♥ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	jadzialove 2009-09-22 03:31 am UTC (link)
	Ahahahaha! Oh Harry! Blowing... giggle snorts Don't know if my vote counts, but I vote 'nay' on the enema... so not sexy. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-22 08:48 am UTC (link)
	Sex-ay is in the eye of the beholder! But I'm not sure if Cath is going to bite, so I might've earned a reprieve on that one, though I'll deliver if she's brave enough. I'm game. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	eriador117 2009-09-22 01:25 pm UTC (link)
	LOL, I too had a scene in one fic where Harry was a bit naive about blow-jobs ;) Lovely little fic :) take care, Annette (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-23 07:29 am UTC (link)
	Actually, when I was cough very young, I had this same, er, confusion about blow-jobs. Heeee! Thanks, Annette! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	keyairreem 2009-09-25 01:35 am UTC (link)
	Lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-25 07:43 am UTC (link)
	Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	elvirablue 2009-09-28 03:03 pm UTC (link)
	giggles At least Harry’s “blow-job” left a lasting impression. Sounds to me like a perfectly understandable misunderstanding, though. When I first read a story that had a warning for pegging, I was very disappointed to discover there were no clothes pegs in it. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:31 pm UTC (link)
	Haaaa, the 'pegging' reminds me of a similar situation I found myself in with 'docking'. The blow job...I've heard this story before, especially from RL women. Hee. Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)