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joanwilder aka RaeWhit (joanwilder) wrote,
@ 2009-09-25 16:01:00

Entry tags:

my snarrys, rating: r, slash, snarry_ldws

FIC: Back to the Beginning
Title: Back to the Beginning (written for Week One/snarry_ldws on LJ)
Author: joanwilder (RaeWhit)
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Genre/Cliché: First time
Word: forest
Summary: It made sense to Severus to go back to where it'd all started.
A/N: Thanks to jadzialove for beta reading.

Back to the Beginning

Not a pleasant memory. Drunken Death Eaters, barely wet behind the ears, bragging and boisterous. A flash of lust, some sweat and spit, a grunt of pain, and before he'd known it, Severus had a cock up his arse.

Harry'd told him his own experience hadn't been much better. A wank in a shower, awkwardness and fingers, a few quick thrusts and it'd been over. At least Harry remembered the man's name.

Tonight would be his and Harry's first time. Severus could sense it, smell it and taste it, and he knew Harry could too.

They stood with their arms around each other. Severus knew what Harry would say, but felt he had to ask anyway. He was surprised when Harry asked him first.

"Are you sure?"

Severus murmured, "Do you trust me?"

When he felt the nod against his cheek, Severus held Harry tighter and Apparated.

It was a warm moonlit forest that smelled of summer, redolent of wildflowers.

Harry looked around, his eyes wide. "I know this place—the Forest of Dean." He paused. "Why here?"

"It was the first time I saw you as a man. The first time I wanted you," Severus admitted, his eyes lowered.

"You were here? Watching me?"

Severus relived it in a flash: pale skin beneath the moonlight, muscles twitching in the cold, long sinewy legs poised at the pond's edge. A pounding heart, his breath whitened puffs of condensation as his mouth suddenly went dry.

"Yes."

Harry smiled, stepped back and slowly removed his clothes, making a pile at his side. There he stood, arms dangling, cock bobbing up against his belly.

"I'm waiting," Harry said softly.

Arousal propelled Severus to a similar naked state.

Grinning, Harry turned, then gracelessly leapt into the pond.

With a feral growl, Severus plunged too.

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	aeryun 2009-09-25 08:22 pm UTC (link)
	Very nice! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:15 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	accioslash 2009-09-25 08:47 pm UTC (link)
	Damn. I should have guessed because I knew this one was yours! Congratulations. There was some stiff competition this round. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:16 pm UTC (link)
	Haaa, you knew, huh? Thanks for the congrats, and yeah, I think the drabbles were pretty good this first week. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	accioslash 2009-09-30 06:29 pm UTC (link)
	Well, I was pretty sure. ;D Sounds like I should have guessed then because this week I can't guess anyone. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	snarry_fan7 2009-09-25 08:56 pm UTC (link)
	Very hot and most excellent.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:16 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks, Sophia! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	supergreak 2009-09-25 09:18 pm UTC (link)
	I loved this one. "The first time I saw you as a man" insert fangirl squee (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	There always has to be that 'moment of epiphany'. :) Glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	drachenmina 2009-09-25 10:46 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, that's lovely! Fucking well done. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

countesszero
2009-09-25 11:00 pm UTC (link)

congratulations!

Grinning Harry leapt gracelessly into the pond.

lovely moment!

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	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	Seemed like something Harry would do. :) Glad you liked it, and thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2009-09-26 01:53 am UTC (link)
	Gorgeous. Love their none too pleasant memories as well as taking them back to the Forest of Dean. Lots of emotion in so few words. Great job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! I'm finding 300 words to be very hard. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sweetmelodykiss 2009-09-26 02:13 am UTC (link)
	That was beautiful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	dementordelta 2009-09-26 02:36 am UTC (link)
	Mmmmm! Loved the little glimpses of the past mingling with the hopefulness of the future! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:18 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	venivincere 2009-09-26 05:51 am UTC (link)
	I was surprised when they jumped in the pond! (In the good way!) I love that Severus first was attracted to him when he saw Harry in the forest, naked and steaming in the cold. Would have loved to have been a fly on the wall for that. :-D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:20 pm UTC (link)
	Hee, I imagine that first time he saw Harry was one of the 'SHIT NO!' moments. And at least this time, Snape gets to jump in too. Thanks for reading, Veni; it's always nice to see you. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	veridian_dair 2009-09-26 06:39 am UTC (link)
	this was fab....can't wait to see next week's! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:20 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2009-09-26 06:52 am UTC (link)
	Such a fabulous drabble. This was a well-deserved win. ♥ And nice banner! g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:21 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much, Ali! Second week challenge was a bit harder, I think. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	alisanne 2009-09-30 11:44 pm UTC (link)
	And yet you kicked ass again! Go you. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	elvirablue 2009-09-28 03:27 pm UTC (link)
	That they’d actually talked about their first times made me squee with delight, because it implies emotional intimacy before physical intimacy. Lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-09-30 06:21 pm UTC (link)
	You're right; I like that progression of things too; in fact, in longer stories I always write them that way (mostly). Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	keyairreem 2009-10-17 12:40 am UTC (link)
	Well done! THe anticipation was awesome! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-20 02:03 am UTC (link)
	I did enjoy writing this one; I'm always wanting to mess with that Forest of Dean scene in canon--so close, and yet so far. Glad you liked it. (Reply to this) (Parent)