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joanwilder aka RaeWhit (joanwilder) wrote,
@ 2009-10-15 22:48:00

Entry tags:

my snarrys, rating: nc-17, slash, snarry_ldws

FIC: Contested Memory
Title: Contested Memory (written for Week Four/snarry_ldws on LJ)
Author: joanwilder (RaeWhit)
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre/Cliché: Detention
Word prompt: 'That can't be true.'
Summary: Slytherins tell the truth…eventually.
A/N: Thanks to jadzialove for beta reading, and congrats to literaryspell for her winning entry this week! I owe accioslash a Snarry drabble for correctly guessing my entry.

Contested Memory

Harry knelt before Severus and smoothed his hands along the pale thighs as he gently spread them open. "God, I do love to suck cock." He looked up, smiling impishly. "Remember the first time? In the Ministry cloakroom?"

Severus hissed and arched upward at the feel of Harry's hands. "Oh, I remember. But that wasn't the first time."

"Yes it was."

"Hmmm, no it wasn't. The first time was during your last detention with me, seventh year, after the war."

Harry snorted. "You're confusing me with someone else."

Shaking his head, Severus leant forward. "You'd skived off your last class. I gave you detention and a chance to brew a Purity Potion, which you botched miserably. So you had a choice: a failing mark or sucking me off."

Nodding appreciatively, Harry said, "Great imagination you have. Go on."

Severus smiled wickedly, then murmured, "God, you were beautiful—on your knees, trembling and teary-eyed, lips stretched around my cock. I said, 'Look up, Potter,' and when you did, I held your head and fucked that sinful mouth of yours." Sitting back, he gazed down at Harry. "You did well. A bit of gagging and drooling, but when I said, 'Swallow,' you did."

Harry laughed, bending in to breathe a hot breath over Severus' cock. "Wow, what a fantasy."

"Fantasy?" Severus asked as he tilted up Harry's chin. "Perhaps it was. Or…perhaps it was my superior Obliviation skills, hmmm?"

Harry considered him uncertainly. "That can't be true. I never would have…"

"You did."

Harry sat back slowly on his heels and stared at him. "Severus, you wouldn't have…did you?"

Reaching forward, threading his fingers through Harry's hair, Severus pulled him forward, then pushed his head downward. "Does it matter? You love sucking cock, and I prefer it to be mine. Now, suck."

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	venturous 2009-10-16 03:37 am UTC (link)
	ooo, Bastard!Snape. wicked-good, Joan! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:29 am UTC (link)
	Thanks, Ven! I'm not sure if he's a bastard or a liar here. :) Maybe both? (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sweetmelodykiss 2009-10-16 03:44 am UTC (link)
	Gods, that was so hot and deliciously wicked! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:29 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	accioslash 2009-10-16 03:45 am UTC (link)
	I really love the ambiguity of this piece. You may have only written three hundred words but there are at least a half dozen (probably more) stories that could come out of this. Which is why I thought it was yours. ;D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	bk7brokemybrain 2009-10-16 02:18 pm UTC (link)
	Ditto! I was going to vote for #1, but upon rereading them all, went with this one for its subtlety and potential. I could read another ten thousand words on this, for sure. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:31 am UTC (link)
	And you and I both know I could easily write them...and more. Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:30 am UTC (link)
	Oh yeah, I thought about all those 'sides'. :) OMG, you've found me out! Still owe you the Snarry; want it to be something you like. So...patience~! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	shadowess 2009-10-16 04:27 am UTC (link)
	oh sneaky and very ambiguous (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:32 am UTC (link)
	Haaa, yes, but as the summary says, he'll tell...eventually...or did he just do that? Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2009-10-16 04:30 am UTC (link)
	Oh, my! How hot! :) That was quite lovely... Makes me want more ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:32 am UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2009-10-16 11:42 am UTC (link)
	Oh my! I love that it's so hard to know what's true. That's marvelous. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:33 am UTC (link)
	That's the fun of magic and Obliviation, I guess. To trust a Slytherin's word or not? Esp when it's Snape. Thanks, hon! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hambares 2009-10-16 09:29 pm UTC (link)
	That is cruel! I didn't expect that level of deceit from Severus, but I should have guessed. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:35 am UTC (link)
	Hmmm, who says it's deceit, and not a tease? I think both these characters would play with each other's vulnerabilities on occasion: Harry on Snape's tendency to take everything so seriously, and Snape on Harry's propensity to be gullible. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	keyairreem 2009-10-17 03:34 am UTC (link)
	Awesome! More please! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:35 am UTC (link)
	Haaaa, next drabble coming up tomorrow. Thanks for reading; hope you're voting! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	elvirablue 2009-10-18 10:31 pm UTC (link)
	That was delicious, although I do wonder what Severus is trying to accomplish by making Harry feel uneasy. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	joanwilder 2009-10-19 12:28 am UTC (link)
	I think Snape enjoys teasing Harry, perhaps playing on his gullibility. I've not decided if he's serious or joking here. But the required genre was 'detention' fic, so I hoped this met the true spirit of it. Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)