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joanwilder aka RaeWhit ([info]joanwilder) wrote,
@ 2009-11-06 21:26:00

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Entry tags:my snarrys, rating: pg, slash, snarry_ldws

FIC: Stating the Obvious
Title: Stating the Obvious (written for Week Seven /[info]snarry_ldws on LJ)
Author: [info]joanwilder (RaeWhit)
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 300
Genre/Cliché: Romance
Word: disfavor
Summary: Knowing the truth is important, but hearing the words, priceless.
A/N: ♥ to [info]jadzialove for beta reading. I owe drabbles to [info]accioslash (who clearly has my M.O.), and [info]lemondropseven for correctly guessing my entry! I'm working on 'em.






Stating the Obvious


A 'no-frills' relationship. Solid commitment, fierce loyalty, easy companionship, and a sexual intensity that ten years hadn't diminished a whit.

But no foolish endearments or playing footsies under the table, although Harry cherished the vulnerability in Severus' eyes on the rare occasion when Harry said he loved him.

Harry knew, though.

Severus said it without, well, actually saying it. How he fixed Harry's tea to perfection, held him through nightmares, attended Quidditch matches. The way his eyes radiated warmth from across a room. How he pressed his hand at the small of Harry's back. Cleaning Harry with a warm, wet flannel after sex. These all spoke volumes, in Harry's estimation.

But sometimes Harry couldn't help but tease him.

Severus was reading aloud, Harry entranced by the rich, gravelly voice that wrapped his heart and soul in a cocoon of comfort and well-being.

Severus stopped suddenly and accused, "You're not listening. What're you thinking?"

Harry smiled. "That I love you."

"Ah."

"Ah? The normal thing would be to say it back."

"I know," Severus smiled slightly.

"Don't you love me?"

"I do."

"There. See, you've said it."

Severus disagreed, "No, I answered a question."

"So why not say it?"

"Because love isn't a matter of words, Harry. Because I won't do you the disfavor of letting you manipulate me into saying it."

"Ah yes, Severus Snape, man of scruples."

That night, Severus was almost asleep, as Harry lay and remembered how many variations of this conversation they'd had over the years.

It wasn't important, he thought, as he rolled over and nudged his knee between Severus' thighs, then buried his face in the hair at his neck.

Severus lifted his head, then murmured softly over his shoulder, "I do love you."

Harry felt as if his heart would overflow. "I know."

fin


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[info]torino10154
2009-11-07 02:43 am UTC (link)
*happy sigh* This is just lovely. Romantic without being schmoopy. ;) Excellent work.

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:30 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much. I was really trying not to be sappy. :)

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2009-11-07 03:13 am UTC (link)
Awwww, that was so sweet!

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:30 am UTC (link)
Thanks, Melody!

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[info]kinwad
2009-11-07 03:28 am UTC (link)
So breathless in its honesty and truth! Wonderful, my dear!

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:30 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]accioslash
2009-11-07 04:45 am UTC (link)
I think I was wrong about yours twice so far in the competition, so I don't have it quite down yet. ;D

But this lovely drabble had your name written all over it. ♥

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:31 am UTC (link)
Awww, thanks. I do like to do romance, and usually avoid the 'L' word like the plague, but this time I went for the big cahuna! And you really do have my number. :)

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[info]veridian_dair
2009-11-07 04:55 am UTC (link)
Every time I read those last two lines I melt. MELT!!!!

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:32 am UTC (link)
My mission in life!

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[info]dementordelta
2009-11-07 05:04 am UTC (link)
*melts* So lovely and full of emotion.

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:32 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Don't use the 'L' word often, but sometimes it does work. :)

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[info]venturous
2009-11-07 05:12 am UTC (link)
I can die happy now. **happy sigh**

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:33 am UTC (link)
Heee, a sparse sprinkling of the 'L' word can do that to ya. Thanks!

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[info]shadowess
2009-11-07 05:24 am UTC (link)
aww that was so sweet and so very snape

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:34 am UTC (link)
Yeah, he wouldn't say it freely, I think, but when he did, it'd be on his own terms. Glad you liked it.

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-11-07 06:08 am UTC (link)
Oh, this gave me the happiest sigh. I think I just melted.

This is Snarry to me, darling. The essence of the thing. Thank you so much.

*tips hat*

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:35 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked it. I don't often have Snape 'say it', because I just don't think he would. *g*

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-11-11 03:13 pm UTC (link)
I'm the exact same way. In fact, I'm my current WIP (which is 250k long) he's only ever said it once.

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[info]tsutsuji
2009-11-07 12:17 pm UTC (link)
**melt**

"Severus was reading aloud, Harry entranced by the rich, gravelly voice that wrapped his heart and soul in a cocoon of comfort and well-being."

*melts again*

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:35 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I'd like to change places with Harry. *g* Thanks!

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[info]meri_oddities
2009-11-07 03:59 pm UTC (link)
That was very sweet. *g*

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:35 am UTC (link)
Thanks, Meri!

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[info]elvirablue
2009-11-10 12:20 am UTC (link)
So perfectly romantic! I’m sure Severus let out a deep sigh of relief, having finally managed to say the words. :)

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:36 am UTC (link)
Yeah, in his own time, huh? No forcing that out of him otherwise. Glad you liked it!

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[info]keyairreem
2009-11-10 08:00 pm UTC (link)
Well done!

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[info]joanwilder
2009-11-11 07:36 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

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